A heavy frost has descended on the castle, looking more like snow has fallen than anything. Yet by midmorning, the frost has melted off leaving quite a muddy trek for anyone heading down to CoMC. The wind is dreadfully chilly so don't forget your house scarf if you're heading out anywhere farther than the castle. Even the lake is beginning to show tinges that winter is rapidly approaching.
Your preferred name: (What can we call you?) Hannah How long have you been affiliated with ezBoard? Around 2 How long have you role-played? Almost 3 yrs How long have you Harry Potter role-played? Code: about 2and a half
~About Your Character~
What is your character's full name? Eliza Dominique Marabella
Character's age?16
Give Give a detailed physical description of your character:Give a detailed physical description of your character: While he mother assured her that one day it would all disappear when she had her growth spurt or that it was all just left over baby fat, Eliza,who stands about 5'4, still maintains a face with "pinchable cherub cheeks," as her mother fondly refers to them as. Her face take on a very round quality giving her very soft features. Her hair is naturally a dark blonde color and falls a few inches past the shoulders, which she enjoys wearing down most of the time. Her eyes are that of a paler blue color and are on the smaller side. Traveling down, her nose is round to match her face and she small full lips.
Eliza has never had a small figure. Heavier as a child she lost some of the pudge on her body when she hit puberty but a good amount of it stayed making her more of a curvier gal. Most of it is seen in her chest, hips, and tummy area, areas that she tries not to accentuate. A little amount of the body's natural muscle can be seen when she flexes, but other than that it's fat. Overall while Eliza’s body isn't what society might define as perfect it's perfect to her.
Due to the fact that muggle wear is only allowed on the weekends, she likes to accessorize a lot with her uniform. Many multi colored bracelets, and she enjoys painting her nails fun bright colors. Muggle attire usually consists of basic but creative looking pieces. Jeans, t-shirts, tank tops, etc, etc, etc.
Describe his/her personality - including fears, hobbies, interests, habits, strengths & weaknesses: When she’s not in Hogwarts learning to become a proper witch, Eliza likes to spend time in Diagon Alley with many of her school friends. She enjoys watching (but not playing) quidditch. A large fan of The Weird Sisters she enjoys sitting in her room listening to them and reading magazines. Eliza certainly isn't a girly girl, nor is she a tomboy. She simply just enjoys being herself and isn't concerned with what society thinks about her appearance. She likes to paint her nails, but sadly she doesn't have that much nail to actually paint as she is constantly biting them. A habit that her mother has been trying to get her to stop for years and years. Often her humor can be very dry and sarcastic but its what works for her to make people laugh, a thing that she loves to do very much. Also she has a passion for talking, especially if it's something she feels passionate about which can be both a good and bad thing.
When she was younger it was harder for Eliza to accept the fact that her body wasn't perfect, and that she didn't look like the other little girls in town, or at school. But age brings wisdom, and now that she has done some growing up, Eliza can now accept her body, and that her imperfections are what make her beautiful, although she still remains a little self conscious about her body (but then again what teenage girl isn't in today’s society?).
She takes an avid interest in learning new things. In school her favorite subjects are defense against the dark arts and care of magical creatures. Potions is her least favorite class, and no it's not just because Snape is the teacher...although that adds to the disdain for the class. Mostly because she thinks that potions class is just mixing and adding ingredients, and that just bores the poor girl out of her mind!
Eliza has one major fear in her life. Snakes. One glance at the reptile can turn this vibrant girl, into a scared little child. The fear is most likely because her older sibling turned her rattle into a baby python when Eliza was just two years old. One thing Eliza can't stand is self-centered people. She isn't afraid to tell off a person when she thinks they're focusing too much on themselves, and sometimes this can get her into a spot of trouble(it doesnt happen that often as she just tries not to associate with people like that). While she has her bad days like everyone else usually, Eliza is a pretty happy girl, with good friends, and good family.
Give the names of all members of your character's immediate family:Celeste Marabella, mother (43)
Antonio Marabella, father (47)
Alex Marabella, brother (19)
Sam Marabella, brother (9)
Explain his/her history: Antonio Marabella was born in the small town of Pienza, Italy. His father was a sheep herder on the side, but made most of the family’s money from a small broomstick shop located in one of the magical towns around the area. His mother was a stay at home and did all she could on a low budget to make sure Antonio and his siblings had a happy upbringing.
Celeste Morrison was born in the town of Kent in England. Both parents were muggles so it was a bit of a shock for not only them but Celeste when she received her first Hogwarts letter (but it certainly did clear a few things up!). Both were very proud of their daughter, and strongly encouraged her newly discovered gift.
It was by chance that the two would meet. The Marabellas had gone on holiday to England, and had taken up a room in Diagon Alley. Antonio had just gotten back from lunch one day when he strayed from his family and looking at the scenes around him, bumped into a pretty young witch with blonde hair. He was twenty-two, she was eighteen.
Three years later, Antonio and Celeste were married. The two decided to stay in England, and settled down in the town of Rye. Another three years later they were gifted their first child. A boy they named Alex. After another three years Eliza came into the world, and then seven years later the final Marabella child was born, a boy named Sam.
Childhood was a happy time for Eliza. She was often described as the giggler of the family. She grew up knowing full well of her talent, and looking very forward to be starting her first year at Hogwarts. Finally her letter came and she was off! First year went very well for her. She enjoyed learning even more magic. Looking back she would always remember how nervous she had been when her name had been called. She slipped the hat on, afraid of what would happen next. Then the hat started to talk to her telling her all of her qualities. It seemed like forever, but was only actually about half a minute, but finally the hat placed Eliza (much to her delight) into Gryffindor! School ended all too soon for her but she was glad to be getting back home to her family.
Summer came and ended and then it was back to Hogwarts for Eliza. With the second year came many new, exciting, but also frightening things. She had new lessons, a few new friends, and also the opening of the chamber of secrets. For a little while Eliza feared that she would not be able to return for her third year at Hogwarts, but thankfully the school remained open. She came out good for the final exams, needing improvement in potions, but overall she was pleased with herself.
Also at the end of second year, Elizas owl Ophelia died, so as a birthday gift Antonio and Celeste gifted thier daughter with an adorable white persian kitten which she named Gwen. The little kitten followed her around all summer and at the end was also very ready to return to Hogwarts.
Third year brought a bigger workload and bigger challenges and a first boyfriend(a 4th year in Hufflepuff). It went only as far as tirteen year old romance can go, and they ended it after only three weeks of dating. Eliza struggled to keep up with the workload but in the end managed to come through with decent marks. Defense against the dark arts was very enjoyable due to the fact that Professor Lupin had been teaching them. But alas all good things must come to an end and Lupin quit at the end of that year, leaving Eliza curious as to who would be replacing him the following year.
Fourth year there was the tri wizard tournament! With so much hustle and bustle going on it was hard to keep up with the work. Each event was even more exciting than the last. She and her friends had had an especially good time ogling the boys from Durmstrang and Beauxbatons. Having Mad Eye Moody as a teacher kept her on her feet, and she enjoyed having him as a teacher even though he was a bit of a nutter. Tragically they lost a student at Hogwarts that year. The death of Cedric was tragic, and although she wasn't very affected by it, she still felt for the poor Hufflepuffs and Cedrics family.
Fifth year could be summed up in one word. CRAAAAZY! Umbridge, the educational decrees, rumor of some secret defense league, just added to all that was happening around her....not to mention O.W.L's! She would always remember when the Weasley twins flew out of the castle into the night, many a time that year she wished she could have done the same. Especially in defense against the dark arts. Then of course that itsy bitsy bit about Voldemort returning to power made her just a little nervous.
Summer was enjoyable. Nothing wonderful or amazing happened.... again, but still she had a pleasant time, and was now looking forward to starting year six!
Wand Type:10 inches, Holly, Unicorn hair Blood Type:While both parents are wizards, one half of her family contains mainly muggles, so a mixed blood I would say.
Student's Year:6th Which house would your character prefer? Gryffindor Why? ? Eliza has the qualities that the usual Gryffindor possesses. She has determination, courage, and a bit of a mischievous side. She gladly stands up for the little guy when someone is in trouble. She has a strong work ethic and she likes to be on top of things in her life.
Give an example of your role-playing:The alarm clock had begun its annoying, once a year, morning ritual. BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP-CLONK! Eliza’s hand stretched out from under the blankets and pounded on the clock a little harder than intended.
"Griwbblemph," she mumbled as she let her hand drop off the nightstand next to her bed and hit the brass frame. "Ow! Fraskash!" More incoherent grunts as she placed her injured hand back under the protection of the warm blankets. Just five more minutes was all she needed. That was all anyone needed every morning. Just five-no maybe six…or seven, or...
Before she could finish her thought her mind was already going back into dreamland.
"ELIZAAAA!!!" a voice up the stairs hollered. Footsteps could be heard (by any awake person in the house) going up the stairs. It was Celeste coming to wake her daughter up for her first day back at Hogwarts. She knocked on the door but, knowing that her daughter had fallen back asleep, she didn't wait for a response and proceeded to enter. "Come on, up now, need to get packing your school things into your trunk," she pulled open the curtains. "Come on, you only have a few hours to get cleaned and packed!"
Eliza simply pulled more blankets over her head and assumed the fetal position.
Celeste pulled her wand out of a pocket in her robe and mumbled "Acio blankets!" The covers went flying off Eliza and dropped on the other side of her room. She smiled and left the room.
"Mum!" she cried as she began to stretch out. She managed to open her eyes and look around at her room. She had attempted to start packing last night, but decided to just 'rest' for a few minutes instead. Now she looked upon the books and clothes and other materials that still needed to find a place in her trunk. "Fabulous," she groaned as she began to sit up in bed. After letting out a loud yawn she began to rub the sleep out of her eyes.
Hi, and thanks for your want to participate in HANA. We appreciate it and look forward to working with you. But, there are some points of your bio that needs editing before you're accepted.
First thing's first: we need the codes in the bio. There is a coded skeleton under the first example that has the bio skeleton. Please make sure to get those.
You can get rid of the note in parenthesis in your appearance. If everything is described well, then you do not need it.
Over all, very good. Some more beefing up of paragraphs would be nice, but overall (again), very good.
When you're done, reply here, and we'll get back to you. Again, thanks!
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(11/30/04 11:05 pm)
Re: Eliza Marabella
Heh, just popping in to say I remember you. *waves* I believe one of your characters' names was Charlotte? I'm not sure.. My old ezboard ID was Aveline Tempest, but I don't if you'd remember me. Anyhow, welcome back. (O:
close your eyes, and i will be swimming
lullaby's fill your room, and i will be singing
singing to only you
dont forget ill hold your head
watch the night sky fading red
but as you sleep, and noone is listening
i will lift you off your feet
ill keep you from sinking
don't you wake up yet, cause soon ill be leaving you
but you won't be leaving me
close your eyes, and i will be swimming
lullaby's fill your room, and i will be singing
singing to only you
dont forget ill hold your head
watch the night sky fading red
but as you sleep, and noone is listening
i will lift you off your feet
ill keep you from sinking
don't you wake up yet, cause soon ill be leaving you
but you won't be leaving me
close your eyes, and i will be swimming
lullaby's fill your room, and i will be singing
singing to only you
dont forget ill hold your head
watch the night sky fading red
but as you sleep, and noone is listening
i will lift you off your feet
ill keep you from sinking
don't you wake up yet, cause soon ill be leaving you
but you won't be leaving me
close your eyes, and i will be swimming
lullaby's fill your room, and i will be singing
singing to only you
dont forget ill hold your head
watch the night sky fading red
but as you sleep, and noone is listening
i will lift you off your feet
ill keep you from sinking
don't you wake up yet, cause soon ill be leaving you
but you won't be leaving me
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