|
Author
|
Comment
|
zendall22
Member
Posts: 17
(3/17/06 12:04 pm)
Reply
|
Loving Me
Loving you
was the easy part
Letting you go
was the hard part
Looking back I
should have known
that something this good
couldn't last
The joy you brought
to my life
I'll never forget
those moonlit strolls
Walks on the beach
All memories I will
always treasure
Thank you for
loving me.
|
Zendallrella 
Administrator
Posts: 102
(3/17/06 1:25 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
Another winner, Mel.  Keep 'em coming.
ZENDALLRELLA
Big Fan ~ BIG NEEDS
|
zendall22
Member
Posts: 19
(3/17/06 1:35 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
thanks Rella!!
|
DisneyGalCC
Administrator
Posts: 112
(3/17/06 2:11 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
It's so final sounding, sad. I like it, though. Hopefully there will be some inspiration for happy poems soon.
DisneyGalCC |
zendall22
Member
Posts: 22
(3/17/06 9:06 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
Thanks CC! I will work on happier ones!!
Edited by: zendall22 at: 3/17/06 9:13 pm
|
DisneyGalCC
Administrator
Posts: 120
(3/19/06 2:16 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
Mel, write what you feel. I write sad ones, too. sometimes the sad ones are the best.
It's just that with the right inspiration... 
DisneyGalCC |
violette1234 
Member
Posts: 91
(3/25/06 3:19 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
Excellent poem!! I love the images you give of the moonlit walks and the beach strolls!
Edited by: violette1234 at: 3/25/06 3:20 pm
|
ZendallFanAlso
Member
Posts: 94
(3/26/06 8:47 pm)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
Quote:
It's so final sounding, sad. I like it, though. Hopefully there will be some inspiration for happy poems soon.
I agree CC it does seem so final - it's great Mel!
|
zendall22
Member
Posts: 46
(3/28/06 9:24 am)
Reply
|
Re: Loving Me
Thanks Vi and ZFA! I appreciate the feedback!
|
Email This To a Friend
Topic Commands
Click to receive email notification of replies 
Click to stop receiving email notification of replies