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zendall22
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(4/11/06 10:22 am)
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Never the Same
As I wished upon
our star
Memories of you
came rushing back
Our first meeting
when you looked my way
and I couldn't breathe
Our first date
when I was tongue-tied
but you were just you
and you eased my fears
You showed me so
much that was new
and I will never be the same
because of you.
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DisneyGalCC
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(4/11/06 10:33 am)
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Re: Never the Same
Mel. I liked that very much. It was just lovely!
and I will never be the same
because of you!
I like the ending of this. Great line.
when you looked my way
and I couldn't breath
Very nice. I can picture that.
but you were just you
and you eased my fears
Simple but elegant.
Nice job!
DisneyGalCC
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zendall22
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(4/11/06 10:43 am)
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Re: Never the Same
thanks CC!
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Zendallrella 
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(4/11/06 4:36 pm)
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Re: Never the Same
Thanks for the poem, Mel. Beautiful.
ZENDALLRELLA
Big Fan ~ BIG NEEDS
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LovinZen
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Posts: 131
(4/11/06 5:12 pm)
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Re: Never the Same
Mel, I meant to go back and comment on this in the Zone and totally forgot. I'm glad I found it here ... it's very moving!
Thanks for sharing.
LovinZen
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zendall22
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(4/11/06 7:44 pm)
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Re: Never the Same
thanks girls! I'm glad that you liked it!
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