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BettaWoman
(4/2/04 12:25 am) Reply |
True Brilliance The words
came to me falling through verillium skies into a space where the master lives two in 1 yes in this dull, ordinary state - longing for the true brilliance 1 to two three and four the words moving fast decide what's going out this door. i sure dig it - i dig the shape i am in. i do |
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chaelosm voice 
 (4/2/04 1:10 am) Reply |
Re: True Brilliance
That is very cool! Wow, it's poetry and art at the same time. Brilliance!
Thanks for sharing this. 
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BettaWoman
crushed a-rose (4/2/04 1:47 am) Reply |
Re: True Brilliance Thank you, chaelosm voice! i don't know if you have heard the term 'concrete poetry.' I got the idea from the form called 'diamentes.' The idea is that the 'poem' progresses from one thought, or way of being, to the opposite. It comes out in a diamond shape. I will post some stuff from when I was in a writing class high school. The perceptions may not be all correct, but they were my perceptions. But that's poetry. What I did with the last poem was to create shape. If it was up to me I would call it 'shape poetry.' So these are the diamente. Diamente Shy Unhappy, cautious Withdrawn, struggling, hiding Loner, friends, group, parties Talking, laughing, socializing Happy, open Popular Poverty Worry, weary Budgeting, sweating, struggling Work, job, success, money Relaxing, travelling, sharing Relief, contentment Wealth Winter Cold, miserable Raining, snowing, clouding Snow, rain, sun, flowers Playing, living, blooming Warm, cool Spring |
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Sugar Mtn Honeybee 
just landed (4/5/04 1:32 pm) Reply |
Re: True Brilliance Very cool, both.. 
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