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zendall22
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(3/16/06 11:49 am)
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WHY
Dreams we shared
left shattered
You are gone
and I am wondering
why
Laughter we shared
Words left unspoken
and I am left wondering
why
Hopes for the future
Secrets that we shared
and I am left wondering why
Why did you go?
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Zendallrella 
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Posts: 84
(3/16/06 11:53 am)
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Excellent!!! 
ZENDALLRELLA
Big Fan ~ BIG NEEDS
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DisneyGalCC
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Posts: 100
(3/16/06 5:07 pm)
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Re: WHY
Mel--I love it! Write some more, pretty please?????
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violette1234 
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Posts: 89
(3/25/06 3:08 pm)
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Of the three, this is my favorite!!! I like the repetition and the rhythm--just beautiful!!! I actually felt my heart fall in my chest (if that makes sense) when I read it!!
vi
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ZendallFanAlso
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(3/26/06 8:50 pm)
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This one so sad Mel! 
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zendall22
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Posts: 47
(3/28/06 9:27 am)
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Re: WHY
Thanks Vi and ZFA for reading it!
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