I really like the picture you've painted with this piece. I can feel this on a deeper level than any poem i've read in quite a while. The words don't cover the page -- they reveal themselves. They "disqualify the nothingness" (i *love* that phrase). Such a unique way to look at writing.

Thanks in a million ways for sharing this. I hope you don't mind that i've copied and saved it, since ezboard is sometimes wonky and loses things, with credit to you of course.

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